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Moka Akashiyaby =Paskiz

Fan Art / Manga & Anime / Digital / Movies & TV

This is my fanart of Moka Akashiya in her vampire form, from the anime Rosario to Vampire

Pretty simple drawing, because I was out of ideas for poses or characters and friend suggested that I should draw her.
People have told me that the way I made the hair looked like the girls don't brush their hair, So this time I tried doing it with longer lines and without jagging the edges. I dont know, maybe it was easier to make, but I feel that it dosen't looks so original now, because everyone does it this way....But you'll be the judges

So anyway, please enjoy it and comment about anything, and I would really appreciate it, if you told me if you like this style of lineart for the hair better.

Program used: Photofiltre
FanArt by: Me
I don't own the character

Critique by =mashkina Dec 31, 2012, 3:26:43 AM

Hello

I'm not a big fan of Rosario + Vampire, but your art caught my eye so I'll be doing a critique.

First of all, what I like about your piece:
Coloring. Your coloring is really neat, colors are clean and nicely chosen (and you even did a pattern on her skirt! how wonderful is that!) Hair looks awesome (really flowy and light). I'd also like to congratulate you on your shadowing - it's perfect.
Eyes. they are well-done, alive almost.
What I think needs improvement:
The Anatomy. Her anatomy looks really awkward to me: jaws are uneven, so are her breasts. Thighs are too large in relation to the waist and hips. (lower part of he body looks kinda confusing)

Overalll, good job on this one! Have happy holidays and keep up the great work.

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Critique by *Onii-chan93 Dec 30, 2012, 11:47:28 PM

Hello~ I'm UnitedBrothers and I will be doing a critique for you today! ^_^

Alright. Let's begin. First I would like to say that I love Moka! She is just adorable! Everything seems to be in the right places and the coloring was done wonderfully. Especially in the hair.

But the hair is actually not the right color. See, when Moka changes, her hair turns white, but I still love how the hair turned out. The two lines under the eyes do make it look like she has bags under her eyes, but I know they aren't.

All and all, this a wonderful piece and I hope I get to see more!