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Moka Akashiya by Paskiz Moka Akashiya by Paskiz
This is my fanart of Moka Akashiya in her vampire form, from the anime Rosario to Vampire

Pretty simple drawing, because I was out of ideas for poses or characters and friend suggested that I should draw her.
People have told me that the way I made the hair looked like the girls don't brush their hair, So this time I tried doing it with longer lines and without jagging the edges. I dont know, maybe it was easier to make, but I feel that it dosen't looks so original now, because everyone does it this way....But you'll be the judges :)

So anyway, please enjoy it and comment about anything, and I would really appreciate it, if you told me if you like this style of lineart for the hair better.

Program used: Photofiltre
FanArt by: Me
I don't own the character
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Hello~ I'm UnitedBrothers and I will be doing a critique for you today! ^_^

Alright. Let's begin. First I would like to say that I love Moka! She is just adorable! Everything seems to be in the right places and the coloring was done wonderfully. Especially in the hair.

But the hair is actually not the right color. See, when Moka changes, her hair turns white, but I still love how the hair turned out. The two lines under the eyes do make it look like she has bags under her eyes, but I know they aren't.

All and all, this a wonderful piece and I hope I get to see more!
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Hello :) I'm not a big fan of Rosario + Vampire, but your art caught my eye so I'll be doing a critique.

First of all, what I like about your piece:
Coloring. Your coloring is really neat, colors are clean and nicely chosen (and you even did a pattern on her skirt! how wonderful is that!) Hair looks awesome (really flowy and light). I'd also like to congratulate you on your shadowing - it's perfect.
Eyes. they are well-done, alive almost.
What I think needs improvement:
The Anatomy. Her anatomy looks really awkward to me: jaws are uneven, so are her breasts. Thighs are too large in relation to the waist and hips. (lower part of he body looks kinda confusing)

Overalll, good job on this one! Have happy holidays and keep up the great work.
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NINJAWERETIGER Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool! (I love Rosario+Vampire! XD)
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LordessSkadi Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:love:
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconbigloveplz:
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HeartANGELfied Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
THis one looks very fierce and fiesty :)
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BunsDream Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Moka! Gosh I love her so much, Rosario + Vampire was one of my first animes and I just love it to pieces.
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it too, it was so awesome anime :iconfinallyplz:
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Bura-san Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Her hair isnt exactly a light lavender color, in the show they said that she was the "Girl with the silver hair" but anyways nice job ^^
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Youre absolutely right :iconmiseryplz:
I just looked at a dvd box I had and I though it seemed something like that color...
Still thanks! :D
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Bura-san Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah no probs ^^
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NekoTami Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh o: I love Moka-san. I love kicks she gives
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