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Moka Akashiya by Paskiz Moka Akashiya by Paskiz
This is my fanart of Moka Akashiya in her vampire form, from the anime Rosario to Vampire

Pretty simple drawing, because I was out of ideas for poses or characters and friend suggested that I should draw her.
People have told me that the way I made the hair looked like the girls don't brush their hair, So this time I tried doing it with longer lines and without jagging the edges. I dont know, maybe it was easier to make, but I feel that it dosen't looks so original now, because everyone does it this way....But you'll be the judges :)

So anyway, please enjoy it and comment about anything, and I would really appreciate it, if you told me if you like this style of lineart for the hair better.

Program used: Photofiltre
FanArt by: Me
I don't own the character
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:icononii-chan93:
Hello~ I'm UnitedBrothers and I will be doing a critique for you today! ^_^

Alright. Let's begin. First I would like to say that I love Moka! She is just adorable! Everything seems to be in the right places and the coloring was done wonderfully. Especially in the hair.

But the hair is actually not the right color. See, when Moka changes, her hair turns white, but I still love how the hair turned out. The two lines under the eyes do make it look like she has bags under her eyes, but I know they aren't.

All and all, this a wonderful piece and I hope I get to see more!
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Hello :) I'm not a big fan of Rosario + Vampire, but your art caught my eye so I'll be doing a critique.

First of all, what I like about your piece:
Coloring. Your coloring is really neat, colors are clean and nicely chosen (and you even did a pattern on her skirt! how wonderful is that!) Hair looks awesome (really flowy and light). I'd also like to congratulate you on your shadowing - it's perfect.
Eyes. they are well-done, alive almost.
What I think needs improvement:
The Anatomy. Her anatomy looks really awkward to me: jaws are uneven, so are her breasts. Thighs are too large in relation to the waist and hips. (lower part of he body looks kinda confusing)

Overalll, good job on this one! Have happy holidays and keep up the great work.
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NINJAWERETIGER Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool! (I love Rosario+Vampire! XD)
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LordessSkadi Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:love:
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconbigloveplz:
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HeartANGELfied Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
THis one looks very fierce and fiesty :)
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BunsDream Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Moka! Gosh I love her so much, Rosario + Vampire was one of my first animes and I just love it to pieces.
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it too, it was so awesome anime :iconfinallyplz:
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Bura-san Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Her hair isnt exactly a light lavender color, in the show they said that she was the "Girl with the silver hair" but anyways nice job ^^
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Youre absolutely right :iconmiseryplz:
I just looked at a dvd box I had and I though it seemed something like that color...
Still thanks! :D
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Bura-san Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah no probs ^^
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NekoTami Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh o: I love Moka-san. I love kicks she gives
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oooooh, me too :love: Moka was so cool! :D
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NekoTami Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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HeartANGELfied Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
LOVE EVERYTHING HERE 8D Its soo amazing :D
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amy4anamaria Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing!:hug:
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe, Thank you so much :hug:
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zkfanart Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Yes, the pose is simple, but she is really a cute gal! Good work, specially on this glance... whadda does she want? ;) Blood? ;)
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much, you always say the nicest things :D
Yes, she likes human blood very much, I think :P
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zkfanart Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
Welcome! Aw, cīmon :icondragonxpplz:
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GeckiGewaldro Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
i watch you a longer time now and i must say that you always improve yourself more and more :)
This is an very good artwork^^
I dont know this anime but i like your drawing soo much :)
At least i want to highlight the eyes *-* i love them :)
:icongoodjobplz:
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :). Ive been trying really hard to get better at drawing and Im so happy for your words that I have gotten better. :meow:
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GeckiGewaldro Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
:hug: thats great :) and i know/ i see that you do it :) So keep on with your work :icongoodjobplz:
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, I will keep on drawing more :D
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TrueRageXRT Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ahhh, Mokkkaaa! cute expression, nice color/detail of her hair too!
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! I really appreciate that :D
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TrueRageXRT Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yw!
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allison731 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks cool. :iconcool-smileplz:
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. I really appreciate that :meow:
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Yamikou Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OMG this is awesome!!!! akashiya!!! :heart:
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :meow: Im glad you think so ;P
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Yamikou Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yeah :D her hair look awesome :3
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! Im so happy to hear that because the hair takes me the longest to make :)
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Yamikou Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
yeah i feel the same XD
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconkonataplz:
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Yamikou Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
kawaai XD
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconraepfaceplz:
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mastercron Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ロザリオとバンパイア? Heee...:iconfuckyeaaaplz::iconpervplz::icontophthetomboy::iconpervplz::iconblushplz::iconcryplz::iconpervplz:
(In the deep we are all perv!!!XD)
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol XP we sure are. Thanks! :P
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mastercron Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL!!!XD
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unonyan Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i mean love how you made it
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unonyan Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
aawesome job ^_^ love wat u did with the hair ^_^
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Paskiz Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much :meow: Im very happy to hear that so I can continue doing the hair this way :)
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unonyan Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
no prob and hapi new year ^_^
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:iconpaskiz:
Paskiz Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy new year to you too ^w^
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